writing a narrative

I actually quite enjoyed writing my narrative. It allowed me to tell the story in which most influenced my writing. I also was very grateful for the comments that were given back to me after I turned my rough draft in. These comments allowed me to better edit my paper, and it also helped to know that I was on the right track as far as substance went. Just some grammatical errors needed correcting and that was really it. The only thing I really had trouble with was the length of the story. The story itself wasn't a long one so stretching it out to make it 5 pages was kind of hard at times. There were certain details I wanted to put in the paper to bulk it out, but I felt they were a bit too off topic and would distract from the story itself. Other than this, the paper went quite smoothly.